My feedback was recieved through a wide range of people. This started with my subject teacher, Mr Smith. For my draft pieces I recieved an email from him saying that the location needed a lot of improvement. Other improvements mentioned by my teacher at this point were to use better lighting to focus on the band and make it clearer and also he said to use a lot more shots as it was quite a rushed process in which we didnt have long to film due to restrictions on when we could use the location.

 

Most people who got to see my draft gave similar feedback to this. They almost all liked the fundamental idea of the performance but believed it could be improved. The ways of improvement suggested by people were ideas such as better clothing and for the poster and digipak there were not many thing to improve from my feedback. All that I was given to work on was to add more tacks to the tracklist and someinformation including a serial number to the spine. these were both added in my final piece and gave it a far more professional look.